Abby comes to Devon's apt. wanting to have dinner with him, but he declines saying he has to get the papers ready to send to Christine.
This is followed by Abby leaving saying she has a meeting - 5 mins. after she clearly had time to go to dinner.
Shortly thereafter, after Devon saying he had to work on getting the papers ready for Christine asap, he turns up at Society for a drink [which he could have had at home while working]
Total inconsistency. These may seem minor but it's lazy and thoughtless writing - don't they remember what they've written 5mins. beforehand.
This is followed by Abby leaving saying she has a meeting - 5 mins. after she clearly had time to go to dinner.
Shortly thereafter, after Devon saying he had to work on getting the papers ready for Christine asap, he turns up at Society for a drink [which he could have had at home while working]
Total inconsistency. These may seem minor but it's lazy and thoughtless writing - don't they remember what they've written 5mins. beforehand.
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